I’ll get it out of the way. The Afters: Book Two will finally come out this calendar year, 2022.
How do I know? Because I hit 80K words in my first draft the other day. Eighty thousand is generally accepted as that sweet spot in novel writing. The word count that officially makes it a full length novel and not a novella. Unless you’ve got a big science fiction tome cooking, 80-100K is the industry standard. And I just hit it, which means even though the book isn’t finished yet, by god it’s close.
Four years ago, almost to the day, I published the first book (with less than 80k words!). Four years is a looooonnngg time. It makes me feel like a bad author when folks I follow seem to pump out a novel every year. I could’ve done it sooner, but I wrote a movie (and filmed it). I started a new novel (and abandoned it when it didn’t work) and all those other life events that get in the way of writing.
Why do I call it the Dreaded 80k? Because it’s not just exciting, it’s horrifying. When the novel is done, it isn’t just done. The editing begins. The proofreading begins. The beta reading begins. The cover designing begins. All these necessary steps to publishing your work to a wider audience and none of them, NONE, are as fun as actually writing the damn book. Writing a full length novel is a massive amount of work. It’s monumental really. Even if it’s a bad book! Writing eighty thousand words into coherent sentences with characters and events and plot is a difficult task. And I’ll reiterate, that’s the fun part.
Then you’ve got to polish it to a shiny gloss. Which leads to the worst part of writing a book: marketing it. Trying to convince the general public that this piece of art you poured your soul into is worth their $15 or their precious time. Because you’re not a big name author. You’re trying to make a name for yourself, why should they trust you?
I, like many others, fell into a trap of my own making. You see, I went and self-published my first novel. No agent or traditional publisher wants to touch a second novel. So I’m going into this knowing that all that jazz taken care of by a traditional publisher, I’ll have to do . This is what I want out of my life though, so there is no turning back. There is no other option for me. I HAVE to do this. It’s a compulsion everyone with a creative mind suffers. We need to make our work and then we need others to see it. Because I can enjoy my own writing, but I’d rather see someone else enjoying it. I’ve loved so many books and I want to give that same feeling to someone else.
That is why I called it the dreaded 80k because it means the fun is soon to be over. The exposed, personal hard work is about to begin. And I can’t wait.
Two super cool updates for my first novel The Afters. My good friend wrote some code and put an ad for my book in space!! You can see it floating around in the above video. Greatest nine seconds of my life.
And then! On the same weekend, I discovered that my local library put me on the shelf! As a self published author it is super nice of them to support a local. Also libraries are the best.
It’s been a while since I’ve posted anything here. I hope you assume that means I’m hard at work on novels and screenplays and not faffing about. I am a slow writer, a fact that saddens me immensely. But I am not a slow reader. Whenever I am without a book to read, I feel incomplete. So I thought it’d be nice to go over the top books that inspired me in 2019 to keep on writing. Note: this doesn’t mean these books came out in 2019, just that I read them in 2019.
I read 39 books this past year. Which means I spent an average of 9 days reading a new book. If I wrote as much as I read, you’d definitely have heard of me by now.
#5 Old Man’s War by John Scalzi
A remarkably awesome book about the future of humanity. Would you take the chance of immortality in return for your service in horrible wars against a myriad of alien species? A great look at the nature of dying, being reborn, and the mental strain of endless carnage in an endless life. Science fiction at its best.
#4 Beneath A Scarlet Sky by Mark Sullivan
Just when you think there couldn’t possibly be another World War Two story to tell, along comes Beneath a Scarlet Sky. A remarkable story about a remarkable (and apparently real) Italian teenager, Sky plumbs new depths of what is possible in a nonfiction narrative. Equal parts romance, spy novel, war novel, and horror, this book will rip your guts out and leave them on the floor.
#3 Ancillary Justice by Ann Leckie
Another science fiction novel but this one follows no rules but its own. Ultimately, this is an in-depth character study of an AI forced to make an impossible decision. A unique universe, the likes of which I haven’t seen before, and I doubt I will again, Ancillary Justice is the smart person’s sci-fi. Less about the fighting and the technology, more about the moral questions posed by them.
#2 The Coldest Winter by David Halberstam
The bible for a non historian who wants to learn about the Korean War. This nonfiction novel grounds towering figures of history into relatable narratives, and teaches you about the global significance of America’s Forgotten War. Rarely does a non fiction history book that isn’t about a single character, but all of them, feel like a dramatic fiction. But here it is, staying with me long after I put it down.
#1 Six of Crows by Leigh Bardugo
If you have had the pleasure of reading Bardugo’s young adult masterpiece, you know why this is at number one. This is the kind of novel that brings you back to when you were twelve, discovering the fantastical for the first time. An expert blending of magic, mystery, intrigue, and romance, Six of Crows is all of these and none of them. It is inspired by the many that came before, yet entirely unique. This is the kind of novel that makes you want to quit writing because you’ll never write anything as good. But it also makes you want to try because maybe you can make someone feel like Bardugo made YOU feel. Run, don’t walk, to read this book before the inevitable Netflix adaptation messes it up.
What do you think? Am I wrong liking these books? Did you enjoy them as well? Let me know!
In a crazy sequence of events that I sometimes have trouble believing, I was able to write two movies and a novel. Does that make me an expert on writing either of those? No way. But I do feel like I have a good grasp on what both require and what differs between the two. I’ve read a lot of posts about what it’s like to write a novel, but a lot less on what it’s like to write a movie. This post is for my novel friends who are thinking about writing a screenplay. There are plenty of guides out there to teach you the art of screenwriting. This is not one of those. This is not about making your writing better, but about what you can expect and what you need to look for moving between these very different disciplines.
1. This Is Not Your Movie
First and foremost, any budding screenwriter needs to understand that the movie they are writing – it’s not yours. Maybe you are planning on directing this future movie you are writing. Congrats! That’s amazing. There are many, many examples of writer/directors killing it in Hollywood. I wish you the best of luck.
But for the majority of screenwriters, that’s what they are: screenwriters. You may serve as a producer, a consultant, something – but you are a screenwriter first. And that means you are writing for someone else. The director is the true owner of any film. When Transformers 8: Age of Explodo-tron comes out and it’s terrible, the audience points to Michael Bay as the culprit. Not the six screenwriters (although, maybe we should).
The sooner you internalize this thought, the better. Someone else is going to change this movie and you need to make peace with that. Unlike a novel, which will have the author, an editor, beta readers, maybe another editor, going at it; a film will have hundreds of creative decisions made by people who are not you. Yours are just the first. This is important because…
2. Somebody Else Is Going To Kill Your Darlings
Usually after the first draft, but generally sooner if you’re anything like me, your novel just won’t work. You’ll clean up dialogue, re-order chapters, add a new character, but at some point you’ll realize something isn’t working. William Faulkner’s most recognized adage comes into play and you must delete entire chapters because, let’s face it, they just aren’t serving the story.
Now imagine you’ve written a screenplay. Perfected it down to every EXT/INT shot. You’ve gone over it with the director, with the cinematographer, with the editor. Everyone has approved. The script is locked. One year later, you’re at the movie premiere and BAM! your favorite scene isn’t in the movie. You were not told, you were not warned. Your favorite lines, just gone.
Guess what? It’s not your fault. It’s not the director’s fault. It’s not even the actor’s fault. The scene just didn’t work and no one could see it until after it was filmed. When you approve a novel with an editor, that’s the final say. The book isn’t going to change anymore. Not so with movies.
Take a look at this example below. These are the first five pages of my first film YouthMin. This car wash scene is the setup to the entire movie. The antagonist is introduced. Our main characters get some important characterization. And it’s funny. (Well, I think so)
The directors filmed this scene. Someone actually dropped an expensive piece of equipment into a bucket of water. But this scene as it is written is not in the movie. Parts of it do make it in, but it is no longer the opening I imagined it to be. I was sad to see the scene go, but it had to go. Am I bitter about it? Heck no. That’s the movie making business and expecting more is not realistic. Fight for your script, believe in it, but be prepared to lose parts of it you love.
3. You Are Writing Three Different Movies
I alluded to this earlier. You are writing three very similar movies. But they are different nonetheless. But this is a way to think about your screenwriting that might help you accept the previous two points. Unlike writing a novel, which goes through multiple drafts, and may change immensely, you are a part of that whole process. As a screenwriter, you may not have a part in the other two movies.
The first movie you are writing is the script. This is where you have the most effect and make the most impact. Your concerns here are very story and plot based.
The second movie you are writing is the one in production. The movie while it is being filmed. This is where the script can get thrown out the window because of unforeseen flaws, actor schedules, equipment needs, etc etc. Things that you mentioned, or failed to mention, in the script pop back up here. Did you provide enough detail for an action sequence? The director may follow your vision. Did you write something vague? They’re going to imagine it for you, whether or not it is what you envisioned.
The final movie you are writing is the one that gets edited from the hundreds of hours of raw footage shot during production. This is the movie that will deviate most from your original script.
4. Less Detail, More Dialogue
Screenwriting is an awkward balance of details. Your job as a screenwriter is to provide just enough detail for a director to imagine the world, without too much that you’re dictating the entire movie. This will be extremely different for novel writers who include incredible amounts of detail in a book. That’s because film, as a visual medium, won’t get that detail until it is filmed. Here’s a small example from the script for The Force Awakens. Do you remember one of the very first scenes where the storm-troopers run out of a landing ship and exchange fire with soon-to-be decimated villagers? Here’s the entire description of that 30 second scene.
That’s twenty one words, if you don’t include the scene description. Can you imagine how a writer would describe that scene after seeing it? I picture at least a half page of detail. But that’s all this intense scene needs in the script. We don’t need to hear the tramping footsteps or hear the screams of the dying, because it is relatively unimportant. We need to get back to what Poe Dameron is doing. We need to see him give the map to BB-8 and tell him to flee into the desert. That’s the important stuff. Dialogue is going to fuel most of the plot movement in any screenplay. Since most screenplays are around 90-110 pages (1 page = 1 minute of screentime) you don’t have a lot of leeway to describe action sequences. You need to be setting up the events that get your characters from point A to point B. Let the director, the cinematographer, and the production designer figure out how those action sequences will play out.
5. Your Screenplay May Never See the Light of Day
This is the saddest difference between writing a novel and writing a movie. I am incredibly lucky in that both movies I have written have become feature length films. That’s insane. It does not work like that. In a description of the infamous Black List I read that something like .3% of written scripts get produced. That’s nuts. Even if it’s actually 3%, that’s still nuts. That’s lower than Harvard’s acceptance rate.
Now, a lot of novels go unpublished by a major publishing house. But with a few (hundred) dollars spent you can turn your novel into a self-published work and have it on Amazon next week. Like I did. Scripts don’t work that way. Even the smallest of independent film productions need something like $100,000 to make their films. Those famous examples like Paranormal Activity are the exceptions to the rule. You may spend months on a script you really like. Maybe it’s a script for your novel. You’ll find that most agents do not represent scripts, especially from unproduced screenwriters. You’ve submitted it to contests like Final Draft and the NYC Midnight Screenwriting challenge and it was not accepted. Years can go by, and it may never see the light of day. And you have to be okay with that. Because all writing is practice and the next script you write will be even better than the first and has that much more chance of getting made.